Story just contradicts itself every other paragraph,one chapter his control has increased . next chapter his control has fallenone chapter his Qi is pure . next chapter it's muddy .one chapter he wants to do X . next chapter doing X is just out of the question .one chapter he gets an inheritance . next chapter it's too bothersome to actually read it .
At first i dropped this book twice but after that it started get affect me and i couldn't stop, You could hate some certain FL's but they become cuter later on, But it was a waste that they couldn't get enough time there is a serious harem potential here but its lacking apart from that mc was very stupid at first but he becomes better later on story and he was similar to certain mc that i couldn't remember his name but better version of it and i didn't mind grammar too much since i'm a person that not too great with grammars myself and My biggest complaint is chapters comes too slow ):
