everything is great up to now (5 chapters)I hope it has big Harem and tai would get all the girls and have smut and R-18 tag.i hope it is not dropped like other fanfics
Really good read. the world is well built with plenty of cool places that have diversity so they feel different when the characters are there. the story and plot progress well. The beginning can be rough if you don't like main characters acting like a pr*ck. he gets better and develops while he finds out who he is. still kinda a pushover sometimes though.
Idea is great. but authir has not done a good job potraying it.Too much random stuff and veRy unnatural. lots of things seem very hapazardLy put together because the author has a thought.Very stupid things happen which is very unecessary. and soo much that can be done is not done.Please wrote down a defLtails of an arc and then start writiNg chapters. not whatever one feels like At the moment.
I love this kind of genre about parallel world so please don't drop it i really enjoy it also the update is so slow i mean i'am not mad but i wish its a little faster
It's story about 3 year old baby fighting with others and killing people.Justt from that alone you know you need to turn your brain off.Story development is terrible too. Author uses excuse like cuz 3 years old MC is young and naive he didn't do obvious smart decision.Authors way of getting strong is sloppy. It's vague thing like looking at bone of beasts and copy it. Author lacks imagination so it's all vague stuff like this.Overall score 1.2Making infant MC is always bad choice.Just look at fate apocrypha.
I was only able to get through the third chapter before quitting this novel. The writing is so bad. Practically every paragraph has something grammatically wrong with it. Hopefully it gets better, but I won't be wasting my time waiting to find out.
"No, you did the right thing. We already investigating Vin in a long time and discovered that he's in the underground society. But even we already knew it we can't capture him because of lack of evidence.
"Erin, my dear, I bought a dress I thought would look lovely on you." Jenna had brought a beautifully made navy blue dress, one that sparked Erin's admiration for the design and impulse to try it on.
They were just by them own, but I can guess why, if the same happened to them. The silence was something notable in this room, because it was big to just 4 people at this place.
