Star catcher - Reviews

Hello! If you want to see what a novel that manages to perfectly fuse dungeons/systems/the apocolypse/ and zombies in a completely new and novel way looks like, you've come to the right place!Exaggerated praise aside, I think this is one of my best works yet. I've learned a lot over my years as a web novelist and I've poured everything I have into Dimension Descent. I hope you'll come out loving the characters, world and story as much as I did while writing it.

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Really like the story some bad grammar but it's fine. Needs to continue with the story. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp.

Hi! This is Ada, an editor of the international Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I. I see great potential in your book, but your book is so underrated here. Thus, I invited you to join the contest a week ago. Please reply to me. Let’s discuss in detail.

After all that, I decided to go back to the game.

Closing his eyes, Jin Yahui took a deep breath and calmed himself. He couldn't help but think that he was missing something. As if he had forgotten something very important-

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Sharina: Guild leader! Stop staring at him!

He's got a point, pero sa mga panahon na yun, hindi ko na alam kung tama o mali ba ang ginawa ko, ang alam ko lang nun gusto kong lumayo sa kanila. Yung galit na daladala ko ang naging dahilan kung bakit hanggang sa mga panahong yun hindi ko naibalik ang relasyon namin ni daddy, just like how it was before when my mom was still alive.

Ade…"

Title: Hero, World Traveler, Unpredictable

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