Silent Strokes - Reviews

This is a great story. I like the setup and the fact that there is no system. It's refreshing.The grammar is great too. However, having reached chapter 219 I think it is getting a little stale. There is no exitement anymore. Everything goes too smootly for the protagonists. There is no struggle, no challenge anymore. Everything goes exactly like the protagonists want. An example: One of the protagonsists says "Although we might not have experience in shipbuilding, we are still able to build a better ship than anything currently in the market". The official they are talking to simply accepts that. This story tries to stay realistic (as much as you can anyway with a setting like this) but seemingly don't take into account that there are other intelligent and innovative people in the world. Yes, they have experience from the 21st century and it gives them a great advantage, but that does not mean that they incapable of losing. I think this story should try to get back to its roots, if just a little.

The book is really nice,although there are few mistakes,the storyline kept me intrigued. The book is also unique cause this is the first time am reading a book like this. Nice work author????????????

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I was in a dark and cold place, sleeping I couldn't feel anything. I then heard his voice calling to me... Even in death it seems like he followed me... Wait a minute I can actually feel like I can move my limbs and open my eyes. I think somebody is touching my face... That's when I tried to open my eyes and to my surprise I was able to, and the first thing I saw was the idiot Leo. When he saw me open my eyes he smiled his silly smile.

Akeno: Mmm~~ Your such a pervert Dusk~kun

I don't really know, I might release a notice of his stats next and looks along with his pokemon

My world's on fire, how about yours?

You're bundled up now, wait till you get older

Wow, what a strong start to a story that I believe has the potential to become one of the most popular books on this platform. I love the use of multiple POVs, as it allows readers to understand the feelings of other characters rather than focusing solely on the MC. 10/10! I highly recommend this novel!

Right now I have finished the draft for Arc 1 of this novel, it's been a lot of work... I would review and refine the chapters each and every week hopefully this would allow yall to have a better experience reading.Arc 1 talks about Gryne's childhood, his road to discover all the new things in this new world, even still as a child there was problems... A prophecy heavily impacted his life, there isn't much he can do about it. Building connections and friendships Gryne try his best to overwhelm the asumptions of him...