free 5 star review just to ask: Anyone know any good basketball novels that are pretty long and i can binge read in a few days minimum? Preferably ones with good grammar lol. I'd prefer if there was romance/system tag in it as well, there doesn't have to be though.
The novel is one of the best novel i ve read everything is great but development of his relationship is very fast 8t semms like he is forgetting about his previous wife and focusing only on his new wife . Some time author should focus on them also
i don't do reviews often, but figured i should because somehow this novel has high ratings. i'll start off with the writing quality, it's poor. the english isn't good, the writing feels robotic and detached, it's not immersive at all and is sometimes confusing due to the poor english. idk about the stability of updates so i just put that at 5 stars. story development is weird, doesn't make sense, there's tons of plot holes and it feels like the author completely forgets everything he wrote about 3 chapters ago, it's like the men in black wiped his memory every 3 chapters. as for character design, it's really awkward, pretty stupid especially the "protagonists" who aren't really protagonists, they're just normal stupid villains called the protagonist while the mc is a slave to the system and an idiot, other characters also feel detached and not real. as for the world background, i haven't read enough to really have a good opinion about it, but so far it's nothing special, and is not that great.
I really like the world and setting you've written, as well as the realistic interactions. My only gripe is having so many characters introduced that it's sort of hard to keep track of all. If you're still planning 50 different characters I hope you can cut it down and make each character more memorable this way. Other than that it's great with pacing and worldbuilding
Isnt this just Realm "Of Myth And Legends"??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? ( realm of myths and legends is it great book by the way)
Such a sweet book ??... It truly is well written and is wrapped up really well ... Simply beautiful ❤??... Sweet and short the perfect way for any work
I’m still not done reading it but I really enjoyed reading the first chapters. The story plot is actually amazing.I’m looking forward reading the remaining chapters.
very funny, although the story is made so that the mc does not suffer losses, it is not excessive or exaggerated and combines humor quite well, a very subtle humor without invading the narrative too much, not like in other stories where they resort to humor to save the story, so far it handles it well
