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The book was very good and very well written... The pace of the story is a little slow in the initial chapters... But you need to build the momentum for the plot, so totally acceptable. And character development and story background is really well shown. And I felt like the chappys are a little long for me too keep reading hehe... It is better to keep the chappys length in between 1.2k - 1.8k words. That way more lazy people like me would read more n your chappy count will be increased. Just my opinion XD a very well written... Keep up the good work. Cheers.
bro continue this novel it has potential and also it will surely make you popular. all things are good if you add plot twists.concept to earn by cleaning is a unique way of thinking in novels. if you are reading this then think about it.
Meanwhile, in one of the human kingdoms to the south, a scarred man was presenting himself in front of an entire court of people, and a hefty man on a throne dressed in golden gowns with numerous gems decorating his body. The large man was the king of the richest land in the human kingdoms, the Midal kingdom, Charles. He was glaring down at the scarred man, quiet for several moments before asking,
"Hmm this is the 246th one and the murderer still hasn't been found. Marshall I am now doubting your groups credibility. I think this case must be handled by us." A man in a completely white suit tried to ridicule the man sitting opposite to him.
After the Gato business was over it was time for me to put my plan into action. As we sat in the living room of Tazuna's house, he still looks uncomfortable being around his former assassins, it was time to get to business. "Sooo Zabuza why DID you kill off an entire class when you were a child?" Ok maybe that isn't a great way to start a conversation.
