This novel can be considered as a diamond in a rough, but still needs polishing to truly stand out there.Grammar is improving at every chapter which is good, story/plot execution is between good and bad "depending on the reader's taste". I would suggest for the author to rewrite/revise old chapters with wrong spelling, grammar and loopholes when he/she has time.Overall, it's a recommended read. Has a lot of potential and the only issue I really see is like I wrote above, execution of certain scenarios.P.S. I'm still annoyed by random reviews that is only meant to bump the ratings, hopefully there's an option to erase those as the tend to give novels a bad first impression.