Shadowlines - Reviews

zZCandyZz rated this 5 stars 18 times, so don't get mad when I rate this 1 star 3 times. Anyways, this is just a novel of a beta cuck MC, so if you're into that then this is the novel for you.

after 41 chapters story is going nowherethe story development is too slowI feel like author is trying to setup too many thingswith the updates of 3 chapters/weeksI don't know when I can read the first good arc of the storywriting quality is good

From chapter 8, I cannot stop laughing when Anastasia called Alfred baka but he knows it?. Their interaction is cute, but when Anatasia tells about the ringleader ok I am getting nervous too. This story is interesting, the background of the story is clear enough, so far I enjoy reading this and please keep updating your story!???

Or has she experienced something similar in her childhood?

"Well the 22.nd was great but there was some thing that i need to do here."

'Through those memories, happiness, tears, heartache and pain I'm finally letting you go.'

I also deided to make the first arc longer to build the MC and the interactions with the other characters.

Beneficio Em Roubo: 0

"I told my mom that I'd be staying at Kurihara-san's house today. Therefore, if I don't go back tomorrow, she'll question it. In other words, even if we can't get out of here, some time around tomorrow evening or the next morning at the latest, I think she'll come here."

But maybe a couple more years of spoiling before training them. They had all the time in the world.

He doubted she would have told him about the meeting if he hadn't showed up. And something about her explanation seemed... off..

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