Sequence: Devourer of Gods - Reviews

Honestly speaking this is probably the best novel I've read on this site. It also has the best MC imo. Story is great. Humor is great. Don't miss out on this great novel!

I absolutely love this book. Bean reading it for almost a year now and I hope to continue reading it for years to come. The characters are well thought ot and developed with thither own personalities. No cookie- cutter character troupes send basic every guy is evil and every girl is beautiful/ in live with the MC. Plot armor is there of course but is not so thick as not ti be ever overcome. The MC is smart, tactful, honest, devious, lucky, but not all powerful. You can honestly feel the roots the MC head to dig himself out from to climb his way towards the top. The In- game aspect of the story is exciting to the point of addiction, and the RL-aspect of the game is a nice and welcome addition to the story that it's both well thought out and necessary. If I could recommend this story directly to a hundred peaple I would ragland it to a thousand. If I could give the story ten stars I would want to give it twenty. If you want a great story, with twist and turns, detailed but easy to follow plot, and manageable info- dumps that don't rant on and on. This is your kind if book.

**Please read until the end of volume one until you decide whether to drop or not! If you can’t tolerate the drama, you will be missing out. Zombie and Cranberry’s relationship is SO MUCH better. I have privilege and I’ve bought all the chapters so far, I would know. Honestly, their dynamic relationship is my favorite part about the story!**It honestly makes me sad to see that people drop this novel after the 6th chapter. The villainess, or Cranberry, and Zombie are around SEVEN years old 6 chapters in. However, she DOES NOT act like a normal child does. Some people also missed the fact that she seems AFRAID of what her mother will do to her when she was beating Zombie. Why? It is revealed at the END of volume ONE. Trust me, you will NOT hate Cranberry. In fact, there is a character you will hate more! Writing quality: [5/5] It’s good so far. Some typos here and there, but nothing major. Would’ve put 4.5/5, but I can’t do a half star.Updating stability: [5/5] We’re given 2 chapters a day at 5AM and 5PM PST if nothing happens to the author. 2 a day is plenty alreadyStory development: [5/5] IMO, the story is amazing. I love the direction the author is taking it and I’m hooked!Character design: [5/5] I love Zombie and Cranberry’s character and I love their development. The characters are lifelike, but their common sense is obviously different from ours because their world is different.World background: [3/5] We don’t really know a lot about the world because of Zombie’s rotten brain skill. This means that we can only learn from whatever information Cranberry gives us, if she ever does. In addition, we haven’t started the “otome game” setting yet. I’ll update this when we get there.If you have any questions, feel free to ask!

The concept of the book is interesting wherein an artifact, in this case, a pen, bonds with people to grant them superpowers. The opening scene is done well too with power-hungry people searching for the pens.Though, a little proofreading/grammar check is required to eliminate the simple mistakes. Keep writing !!

          well the story has a lot of potential there is simply too many chapters wasted with life and basically a whole Lotta nothing that needs .

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One of better original novels on the site. It 's been a good story so far and just starting to get interesting.  As always hoping for  more regular updates to keep up the interest.

A powerful start with great image created. The plot grows so well throughout the chapters while the picture becomes clearer through those words written. Overall a great read

So far even though there are only six chapters at this time, the book is honestly awesome in its progression, you are doing marvelous.

The pill dissolved upon entering his mouth and turned into a warm current as it entered his body.

With her desperate eyes looking at the man she was talking to, the little girl winced in pain from looking so far above her. The acuteness of the discomfort in her head could only be a bad sign for the little girl, but she fought through it to look up at the man before her as tears began to fill her eyes. She had successfully found people to help her but in return had brought more trouble to her savior than they had faced earlier.

(Yamato) "Alright I agree. I'll speak to the Hokage about it before that though."