21 chapters read, overall good story, translation quality (3) is good as in grammar, but five great families of us not a thing (can be waved off as part of the fiction world), repeats already proven statements (might be an emphasize, but it gives more of a repetition effect then emphasize), and some other stuff.Good plot, nice system though ‘divine’ skills, not all deserve the title divine, but still good.Good story development (5).Background (4) build-up is good-ish.Updating stability(5)-probably will stay at 40 for long time thouCharacters (4)-Nice backgrounds for someEnjoyed reading :) (+1 in translation quality)