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I didn't like the female protagonist seriously if you don't like her at first you can know that she is like that as far as i read (i was in chapter 33) and after reading until chapter 33 i got tired of her bad attitude but you know that this is just my opinion, so read and draw your own conclusions*the guy confesses to the woman so she goes and gives a test, seriously she gave a test to see if he could stay with her these and other attitudes made it seem that the focus of the story the "romance" became for me a total loss of time

To be fair I understand that enumerating in value helps in understanding and saves effort in the narrative, but let's review: the writer puts the MC at the point of invading the dreams of others. And the best he can create on top of that are points to buy items? There is a whole mystical world to explore. Or you can go to science fiction and develop a dream comparison and use that to create marketing. Or something new: the MC can simply help other people for free, after all there are people, volunteers for a better world or start helping the family and then interact with more people with other problems. Sometimes these texts are so generic and seem like a forced catharsis. There are people in the world besides the MC and it should be the author's job to develop that. Well, if the MC suffers from cold, hunger or violence, is it because other thousands or millions suffer the same and what is the answer to improve that? Hit someone arrogant and run away.

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I have just finished the first volume and really enjoyed it! The characters are interesting, the way they play the game is something you don't often see in novels like these but with the writing style of this author it really shines!

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Wow just wow. its been long since I read anything except fanfics but this is a nice change of pace

In fright, I took a step back and waited a while before I summoned enough courage to regain my ground.

"Ya, I better get moving too, before da wife gets angry!" T-Strip says while starting to speed walk toward his car to drive home from the company. D-Billy watching his retreating figure laughs and says with a slight sad tone.

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Sorry, I confused you with GodDevil

He ran down the hall, passing an intersection and took a sharp turn left.

The last  coversation  they had with  his brother.