Return at Dawn: Beyond the wall (Bl) - Reviews

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The only good thing about this novel is that it isn't littered with grammatical errors. It's only lightly sprinkled throughout. If someone told me this was a parody, I would not doubt them. It is that bad. The tropes have been escalated to being the entire plot, and the author decided to use every cliche they could find. If you are versed in this genre, this is a comedic masterpiece. It has no self-awareness. I didn't talk about the story because there is no story or tension or depth or anything interesting.

good thread but distroyed it perfectly.mc has no commonsense . writing is very bland. feel sleepy... nothing new in this novel..if this is your first gaming novel you can try read few chapters..

At least you put more twist in the story..later i guess after this arc..that will be cool if there is an assassin system..there will be other system like warrior system meaning there are other reincarnators in this world but still focus on the mc... that will be more diffuclt i guess......but continue the hardwork...

This story could be quite tasty as Boxxy T. Morningwood would say. The only problem it has is that from chapter 30 to 40 it seems like a robot was writing it, checking events off of a checklist as it plugs in different names and places. Overall I'm still willing to give this story a chance as long as the following chapters aren't copy and paste like chapter 39-40

when is the next chapter going to be. i am enjoying your writing so far but it is too early to think on weather the stpry is good or not yet

Review Change: this webnovel 100% has the capability to stand side by side with the other top webnovels (for example, My Vampire System). the novel has a few grammer mistakes but that doesnt affect the meaning behind the paragraph the author is trying to express. Overall this webnovel is already in my top 10 favorites and i greatly urge new readers to give the webnovel 10 chapters before writing it off and you’ll be hooked. In all honestly, the biggest write off for most is the amount of chapters a webnovel has but if you give this one a chance, you wont regret it. Once the webnovel has a little over 200 chapters, I bet it’ll be a top webnovel as it rightfully deserves. That’s all from me. ?

Hello people, this is Eshwar, it's now chapter 303, the genre has changed to Weak-to-strong, this is my third milestone!!! (Woohoo!!) I wanted to post a review yesterday, but I forgot, till now I realised that the story mostly contained things about the MC Eshwar, so I am learning of how to give more depth to other characters that are directly or indirectly related to the MC, this my first novel in which I have learnt many things, for which I am extremely thankful for the novel and you guys, there are still a tonne of things that have yet to learn, so while I learn and grow, hope you guys enjoy the story, thank you, thank you, thank you (for your mind, body, and soul), thank you very much, the story will get interesting from here on (more interesting than before), thank you for reading, hope you enjoy reading, and as always,[Peace]

Thank you all of your support with this i can make it to 30 chapters and i post the daily one chapter and this sequence will be continued Thank you for reading

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