Classic Game lit system story and the best part about the story is the game itself. It is very intriguing. The writing is awesome, lucid and flows well. The story pacing is pretty good, and I have shared my feedback with the author about story development in the chapter comment. When the game starts, it is worth the wait. The world building is done beautifully, both in the premise of the game and inside the game itself. The MC is very likeable, boy next door, easy to connect with. The great thing is despite this being a first person, the author doesn't have any unnecessary internal monologues which can be super annoying. Expositions are done expertly. Great work, author. I will keep it in my library simply because I wanna take notes, as a fellow system writer, lol. Please keep writing. <3
