Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
I like the novel but it feels like a plain white bread , if that makes sense , mainly the characters are missing something that will make them great, if that makes sense. The novel is good but it's missing some pieces that will make it great