Realm of shadows: The enchanted dungeon - Reviews

Pardon me but at your 5 chapter/ week release rate it will take you 12 years to catch up to the raws IF they immediately go on hiatus.Ain't nobody got time for that!Seriously, release rate for this needs to be AT LEAST 3-4 chapters a day so you can catch up in a couple of years, hopefully.

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Translation-okay,Updating stability-okay,Story Development-okay,Character Design-Okay,World Backround-okay.Well I was just thinking its about time I make a review for this good novel,1st its like Terror infinity and Ultimate evolution because of its entry based model but also different because in TI and UE the stories is based on movies,differrent because in this novel in every dungeon there is also story and its original made by the author not something copied from others,2nd as far as the story goes its good the MC is not that strong in the beginning he's power is earn through hardwork and challenging risk to earn better rewards he also know how to use all of his advantage,3rd ehhh im waiting for more!!!!!,for those who read this review right now i dont see anything wrong with this novel so I Highly Recommend it,thats all.

Just want to ask MC won't get cucked right?

An amazing story, updates are stable, and the plot is really original. This story is one that's worth reading, I'm excited to see how this story will develop.

first review!!!still need a lot of work in story building, chapter length also need some works. grammar is excellent, i haven't found any big grammar problem. let's see how far you'll make the story, goodluck!

So this was definitely an interesting story which can attract those who play these types of games such as myself and I enjoy how the author was able to capture the feeling like the odd one out around many other experienced players. Sadly, while the current story is very interesting, it is riddled with grammatical errors, bland descriptions, and a severe lack of emotions. There is much, and I mean much to be desired from the novel as it has a great plot but it isn't executed very well. Taking some time to re-read your chapters and rewrite them will definitely increase the popularity of your story. Writing isn't that easy, but I know you can improve!

After that is one of the many Will's in the Computer Science department. Then Alan who's doing a double major. Then Solomon who I tutored in PLC. Then Haeley, then Delvin, then Amy.

"Duh! What are you even saying?" Jasmin tapped on Sonia's shoulders then the two giggling at their conversation. Jasmin was walking backward until they reached the crossroad to their class. Sonia realized someone was approaching and tried to warn Jasmin.

As for why Simon and Lily never mentioned anything, having no privacy for an entire week made them quite numb. They no longer cared for seeing others naked as it was an ongoing occurrence.

"I played hooky at school today so I don't want to be seen by anyone I know and there is someone I know right there." She answered back but instead of doing what archer did in the anime of just leaving Gilgamesh alone I decided to have a little chat with him.

With a swing of Shirou's hands, they dropped down over Yamamoto like torrential rain.