Ummmmmmmm, i don't know it's great. I love it. Used great words........ And I really don't know what to say I'm just writing nonsense just to reach the minimum number of characters hehe...But, it's great!???
A powerful start with great image created. The plot grows so well throughout the chapters while the picture becomes clearer through those words written. Overall a great read
Very interesting synopsis and story. Every sentence makes you feel like you are wanting more. Just a little more. Only a few chapters in and I am very interested in seeing where this goes. Keep it up, author!
