Ramona: The Alpha’s Nemesis

This is so interesting...  Keep it up authoress....Can’t wait for more chapters...

One of the poorly written novels with lazy, low-effort writing. When the author wanted the main character to have an enemy, an antagonist pops out of nowhere and becomes his arch-nemesis without any development or proper reason. It seems that the author is too lazy to think of a valid reason to make someone the MC's enemy, so he rely on typical low-grade Chinese young master drama to make it happen. .0/10. If you're not going to put effort into your novel, why bother writing it in the first place? It's a waste of both your time and mine.

I literally cant read the story and follow whats happening, in the first chapter alone he gets a call then gets into his car and then it jumps to he is in a car with someone and they dead leg each other? then he gets a call about a medical transport and told that it isn't a rally, then it cuts to him writing down some race cars racing results. Worse than MTL and that's really telling.

alright... this young man is full of indecision. The setting for this story is good, but you basically threw it out the window early on. James just seems like any other slightly experienced player if not a little less do to some questionable decisions. also i understand that his sister is sick and he needs to make 400k in a month, but he already has 300k in less than a day, so that canary has pretty much sung its song. His mentality also seems really weak for someone who reincarnated. On that note i think the story has potential it just needs some polishing and to stay on track with the focus points of the story.

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Best story so far Mr author.Am in dire need of a new chapter soon plzzzzz.I love the everything here.Its just Perfecto I can say.Keep on with the same morale.Love your novel soooo muchhh