Rai: Dark & Light - Reviews

First off this is going to be a complaint or just hating I guess so don’t really expect Constructive Criticism..Now that’s out of the way 1 reason on why I don’t like this FF would be how MC just interact with the SCP Verse. He was literally so emotional in the 1 chapter for family but the moment he knows that he is in the SCP verse he suddenly forgets them and then literally has the biggest hero complex ever to just save the tragic SCP that were kill/abandoned/forgetten by the Foundation when he literally says that he knows more than the Foundation so he should at the bare minimum think of the perspective the foundation do to these SCP.2 Reason he knows that these are fictional character but idk if I understand what Author is trying to say but he thinks he can’t essentially be killed since he is from the “real world” where as the SCP is just fictional.Final reason MC to support the Hero complex is the fact that he automatically and I mean automatically make it sounds like the foundation is the Big Evil Villain of the story while he is the Hero?I‘ll just be giving this 3 since No story so far in my experience can make me give a 1 other than GhostyZ himself but thats another story

I’m a big fan of slice of life novels / mangas. This kinda reminded me of “Bringing a farm in a different world” so I’m kinda looking forward to this novel

So I've read up until chapter 59 and so far I'm really liking this book it's got pretty much everything I like, such as necromancy, a not evil but also not hero type mc who I hope eventually turns into someone like Ainz Ool Gown from Overlord (character/personality wise not physically). I really hope this novel can get a lot of chapters (500-1000 at least) and not stop at like 200 chapters. Keep up the good work.

I really like the world and setting you've written, as well as the realistic interactions. My only gripe is having so many characters introduced that it's sort of hard to keep track of all. If you're still planning 50 different characters I hope you can cut it down and make each character more memorable this way. Other than that it's great with pacing and worldbuilding

It was quite good! Some of the scenes are quite realistic and the description is good. The plot in itself was quite interesting!Keep writing and best of luck!

In all honesty, I really like the start up of your work. The moment that the mistress died in the first part was exquisitely well-done! No words can truly describe how happy I am reading such a wonderful chapter/story. It's even better than "I was reincarnated as a sword

This is Porn + Cultivation novel.The grammar is similar to google translate and **** scenes are really descriptive, like describing the genitalia fondling part and penetration.If you enjoy reading about *** scenes and don't care about grammar you might like it. The cultivation part seems like it's the background part of the story, and he already transmigrates with a cheat like technique that, guess what, involves ***, and he became a genius after waking up, and can read minds? yeah... no thanks. Anyways my review is to balance an overrated score that it has right now.

Hard to find fault with this book in terms of writing quality. The quality is very nice. The chapter lengths are long but the paragraphs are nicely structured so it is easy to follow and keep track. The story and character development is really well done. Although the idea is very simple, the writing makes it a nice read. Really worth reading in my personal opinion...

"I AM PANCAKE-ETTA"

When i were primary 3, there were a new guy called Javan Sun . He is from Xishan Primary School and a term past he is very chatty and he is in my group and his best friend is a guy called Yang Zhong Han came to this school called Wellington Primary School later than Javan.

Chest: Leather Jacket (Deff: +5)

The princess has average looks and has no magical power at all. That's right, no magic. She should have been banished. Luckily for her, her father conducted her test in private and no one found out. So for now, people think that she has superior intelligence since that is the easiest to hide.