Promised Reality - Reviews

Like fresh snow this story makes me just want to cuddle under my blanket and read. Amazingly written and takes me on an adventure that I can only say .. wow what an imzgination.Well done Author. Please dont stop writing. You have inspired my mind with your story

I liked his novel. I recommend it for those who are looking for obscene novels. I want to read more. I hope you don't lose your motivation.??                             

Some face slapping is always expected in a Chinese novel, but this one is just too much. The plot moves from face-slap 1, to set background for face slaps 2, and 3 with some mildly random face slaps in the middle that will help set up face slap 5... it's just too much.The novel follows a Pokemonish style where all the fighting and strength gathering is done by the pets, while the MC remains pretty useless 9so far). The MCs IQ being even lower than Ash's doesn't really help either.

I like that this one is something a little more refreshing. even with the system powe-ups not too extreme in the power scaling sense. the conflicts don't seem too forced, i.e. young masters everywhere. I just hope that as the story progresses, they don't make it repetitive with the remaining countries.

Raw plz??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

Not the best but good.Characters are knida forced and unnatural specially dialogues.

Great start so far. I love the idea of a fox as the MC; it makes the story very interesting and funny. Great grammar and spelling. I am looking forward to more chapters.

I guess I should go for the big round fountain, as much more water is falling down hitting the water surface. Which mean more sound that mutes the sounds I make by walking. There are some people around, not many maybe there is some kind of event going on, with a place as nice as this you would expect more people relaxing here. Some old folks are sitting on some of the benches while eating or just chatting. Some parents are getting pulled along by their kids. And other couples are pulled by their Pokémon. Some Rockruffs, some Shinx, I can even see a Pichu and an Aipom.

+15% Damage

Incidentally, when you get into these gray-area titles, there seems to be no consensus on whether they should be in quotation marks or italics. I'm using italics. Partly because they are longer than short stories, but mostly because book publishers generally italicize them so that they appear to be full-fledged novels.

Thanks for your reply! I dont plan to make him equal, but worthy to follow our awesome mc:)

The little fairy bowed down at the frumpy old cat calling out, "Junior meets Master Karin, master of masters, I humbly plead thou to help my friend for a special kind of upcoming battle, a dance match, a duel of death against an elven general."