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Well, how should I put this? The plot and character design (except for the Female Lead) are just mediocre. There isn't much development and they're not particularly memorable. The intimate scenes are somewhat heated (though their first time was quite baffling, especially from the Male Lead’s perspective), mainly because the Female Lead is proactive, but they're not entirely outstanding either. Nonetheless, I was entertained. It would have been better with more depth. For example, the Female Lead’s past was only mentioned at the end. Additionally, having the Male Lead chase his wife to the crematorium (I would really like to see him beg on his knees, lol) and exploring his fears and emotions could have added some emotional scenes to the story.
Romance-wise, I'm not sure. Their relationship began with lust rather than love. The Male Lead being arrogant in the first chapter and then being seduced in the following chapters was really confusing to me.
, it's not bad for a quick read. I enjoyed it mainly because I like the Female Lead’s temperament. 7/10.