PROJECT ALPHA - Reviews

Pls update more chapter!!! Cant wait to read next chapter...................................................................................................

Vary perfectly Novel

I don't know what to say other than: THIS IS THE GREATEST BOOK EVER!!!! I personally think it is better than CA, but that is always debatable, as they are both really good books. Both CA and RPP have the potential to reach #1 on ANY ranking, and they WILL get there. I love Jack. He's funny, he messes with NPCs, and he is OP! Can't wait for new chapters and more of this story!

no raws posted, westernized characters, wrong characters name (avril/alice) in chapter 2... probably westernized trash rewrite...ffs why is it so hard to keep same character name consistent throughout the novel... probably cause author/translator doesnt care...

Coming into this I thought it would be a MVS clone but surprisingly that wasn't the case. Sure there will be some moments where you can see that the novel was heavily inspired by JKS's works but,  it's pretty different in its own right. The beginning is pretty much the same but around a couple of chapters in, the story starts to become it's own. Kye meets a pretty cool cast of characters most of which aren't similar at all to MVS's be it their personalities or the way they interact with one another. The events that have taken place and the way Kye develops also differ from MVS. The story is still in it's infancy stage but I can see that it has potential, it's up to the author to utilize it and turn it into something great.

Boring . Idiot mc.                                                                                                                        

I like everything, the story is consistent enought and the mc is weak to strong type, but too weak for my taste, and there is one thing that i HATE HATE HATE, it is the way that the mc is totally submissive, Mark keep bullying him but he dont do nothing about it never even when he can in the chapter "faceslapping 101

The story have potential, great plot and well detailed description, but it would be much easier to read if you space the paragraphs.  But it's a great story and I highly recommend.

Quite nice one with unstable updates.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I made it to the front door of my house eventually. My mother opened the door, and she didn't avoid my gaze this time.

Eros said then:

Everything stops. My body freezes, my mind blanks, and I knew from deep in my soul that something monumental has just happened; I don't even have to look to know that hanging quietly on the wall. The clock began to move.