Started this book just to test it out, planning to stick with it! Definitely recommend it to readers looking for more from their WN experience. The text is beautiful descriptive, painting a vivid image of scenes, action and characters alike. The author really finds his stride and strikes a nice balance between his descriptions and dialogue. For me, it’s clear and natural to read. Easy flow.Have to commend the dialogue! It’s a pet peeve of mine when dialogue serves as meaningless fluff, but here it’s full of interest and progresses the narrative. I love teasing, witty banter, sinister threats, bravado… I don’t think I’ll be disappointed. (…Glares at author and expects him to deliver!…)Well thought out world taking shape. Characters feel distinctive with a lot of potential—varied abilities, personalities, motivations, etc. I mayyy already be picking my favorites. ? The story doesn’t really hold your hand, but it’s easy enough to follow along (explanations do come). The author has an excellent command of the language, and there are minimal errors or typos. (Thank you!)Updates have been consistent with chapters of satisfying length. Scene changes are clear and easy to follow. Same for POV changes. Definitely curious where the plot is going and looking forward to the characters, action and machinations!
