Pretending (bxb) - Reviews

I hate Jesse. How could he do that to Renee? Renee is a strong woman, even  with all the hardship she going through, she keep going forward for her child. I cannot imagine if this sort of thing happened to me. Great job author in producing such a masterpiece. I just read up to ten chapter.

don't bother reading it 30 chapters are waste it can be completed in two chapter but the extended it to 30 chapters it wasn't of time

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Really?  You are give Three wishes and how many do you make? I counted at least 15xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

So i just found this novel, and i read it to 3rd chapter and now i love this novel. Hail Author, Hail Author, Hail Author...  Is 140 words or something like that done yet?

Read 12 chapter of the story, and i can say I really found something interesting.No hi-fi vocabulary, simplified and easy to understand writing style...which is kind of weird.As an author myself, you changed quite a lot of my view about writing...I really mean it.Negatives-Pacing of story, and first chapter is kinda not that catchy... compared to the chapters you wrote ahead.Story... I won't say much about it since I only read upto ch 12.But so far, so good.Keep up the work

OMG. I never expected the things that's happening rn. what happened to his father? what about his mother? Sox and Miss Havishma!!!!!! Ahhhhhh its crazy. I want more... and also Q.R.C made the glass to stop explosion but this guy used his electricity.

Ying Yue was surprised for a second and didn't know how to react. After she recovered she started crying. She had lost this warmth and now she was finally feeling it again. Soon her cries became loud sobs. She started crying all of her pain out. She started feeling tired from crying and fell asleep. When she woke up it was already afternoon and her whole family was surrounding her. When she saw that scene her heart warmed and she smiled and her dimples where very deep. When her family saw that they knew that she was genuinely smiling and smiled with her.

It was now only 3 days until the day of the Demon Subjugation Summit and there was still no word from her adopted father, the Emperor of Rome, nor was there any sign that she or the others were going to be given a fair trial.

  He reaches his apartment and unlocks the door. '..Someone was just here..' He does his usual routine and ignores the feeling. 'This is probably why the Dragon hid himself yesterday..' He pretends to sleep for awhile to monitor this weird presence. Time goes by and he can feel the effects of the medicine wearing off. He struggles to keep his act. 'At least, my body is getting used to strenuous activity little by little.'

(I'm still having a writer's block... So I'm updating a bit slow. So please give some suggestions or inspiration for this Novel.)

totally adore] he also had green eyes and he was a bit taller than me. "Hi, uhm sorry for the intervention but are you guys from around here?" I asked