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It is a really good novel,it has it's issues but that's ok. It would be interesting to see if the mc could use more than 1 extra ability when his limiter is removed, maybe be even able to fuse abilities and make insane attacks

I am loving the novel development presently, I quite a good novel there are no harem cliches or girl loving here and there I was thinking it was going to happen before during the Wang family daughter and I was about to abandon it but thankfully I didn't. it also doesn't have those arrogant protagonist vibe everything is done with great stability, but his strength increase is quite slow, but that not the issue the issue was him not using his main cheat anymore which is to use forbidden cultivation technique since he can't die

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around ch 30 its obvious that it was translated by google translate or some other machine. i couldnt even tell ehat was going on

the story is really a great hidden gem!!!would like the author to1. make the chapter titles more expressive2. put on a good book cover3. make his writing style more dramatic4. put on a good and interesting summary all to attract more readers...best wishes for future?seeing potential in the story so dont disappoint(first time writing a review)

After reading the synopsis, I instantly wonder how the story would go. If Den would be able to survive in the new world especially with his low status, or if he wouldn’t make it and will just die helplessly. The first chapters were written well, there were no doubts about that. The story develops at a comfortable speed with good insight on motivations and goals that keeps the whole book entertaining to read. Overall, I would say that the writing quality, update frequency, story development, characters were excellent. The world-building was also done very well, and I really enjoy how the story evolves. I truly hope that this book will do well. Good luck to you, Author.

highly recommended , don't miss to read this

Guys i came from oznoe other novel which is chaos kong, i procastinated to read this novel as the cover dont show that much…but beooooooooooo try this gem man, it will make you fall in live quite quickly hahaha, i think the earlier chapter is when ozone is still not that good bcs there’s lesser than i thought of perk being a prince of a immortal hegemony but man the fight scene? The storytelling it’s very compelling!!!! Ozone has that talent to write a very very very good fight scene if i may, goodluck man!!

I like the story even if there are some spelling mistakes, it doesn’t affect the immersion. MC is cool btw ?

A novel with promising aspects. This is well refined and the writing keeps you engaged in the story. I recommend it.

Ni Yenzi saw the buildings and jumped off his sword in mid-air, he was flying relatively high, about the hight of the wall. He fell all the way down under the shocked gazes of everyone there, there were not many people there, it was just some guards and some couples with their children, it was a good place to go sightseeing. Around the 50-meter mark, Ni Yenzi started to slow down, one could see tiny ripples of air underneath his feet and they were gliding him downwards slowly.

Annabeth just looks at Amirah's running form and squeezes her eyes shut. "You know, Luke?"