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KING CRIMSON!Also really enjoy the idea of a pet king but instead of owning a store he fights and cheats life with his magic pets. Plus, the story isn't moving slowly like most animal related stories do.

I was wondering why this stories names and setting came off as a mess! But then I found out the RAWS were set in China and it had been Westernized by some hack.Hopefully if it is picked up they will dewesternize it so it is made bearable to read.

It's a worse version of "I Can Create Perfect Accidents." Even that novel is subpar but this novel? It sucks.Identical concept with the only real difference between the two being the main character here is a lot more decisive in his actions. The pacing is also faster but that comes with the cost of no real depth or actual background. Keep in mind I skimmed eleven chapters so maybe I missed certain things.Overall, 1.8/5 stars. I'm being generous since this is a blatant plagiarism and the new author wrote an even worse story.

Awesome read and definitely worth it. Pretty good novel as I just flowingly read through the chapters, which is a good thing. Totally RECOMMENDED read for those who are wondering. MC is OP as his cheat allows him to learn and progress his techniques really fast.

I came across this book not so long ago and to be honest it is one of the best books I have  ever read..Keep up the good writing skills dear author

Oh my god! Your writing is phenomenal, it flows so smoothly. And the plot itself is so so interesting. I can't wait to read about the mc's character development. Keep up the awesome work!

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Well, Author by the way is maybe a beginner, since you simply accelerated things a lot, there was no development of love and feelings between the characters they just decided to 'date' out of nowhere but apart from that the story has great potential for development, thank you .

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