Pillow | vmon - Reviews

how did Liu Yanran became 29yrs old in chapter 300+ and in 10+ chapter she's 23?? also story development is full of cliché please make Ye Xuan an adult and I also ship him with Liu Yanran that's all than you and also keep up the good work author...

BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!WONDERFULL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MASTERFULL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I would give it all 5s but there are some grammar mistakes and some poorly written sentences but very far in between.I'm 60 pgs in and I'm wondering how this novel is not more well-known. very well done so far. It is a slow read when compared to other web novels, but I have enjoyed each chapter.if you want to read a story of the coming of age of a prodigy and his real struggles as he tries to make the world a better place, take a read.

SERIOUSLY WEBNOVEL YOU DROPPED THIS FKIN NOVEL ? THIS WAS ONE OF THE GEM THERE IN  A SEA FULL OF ROMANCE WITH CEO AND CLICHE NOVEL WITH RETARDED MC . YEAH I'M TALKING ABOUT POWER RANKING BULLSHIT WITH ALL THE SHIT NOVELS.

did not really find it that good Idk why everyone says it good?I am at chapter 32 and I still find the mc kinda stupid and he should have the advantage of an extra life and act more smarter

(Hiruzen) "It's not a big deal, I'll just think of you as I did root with Danzo."

He began to run towards his direction and brought out his weapon.

Arturia fell silent before speaking softly. "I don't need to be protected," she said. She could understand what Emily was speaking of; she had been the same when Kay would constantly bully Liamrei. However, what mattered to her was the most basic of desires. "I just want to fight beside them."

"7 hours"-Feha replied in a hushed voice, afraid of making me any more angrier. Well, it was understandable as I was constantly cursing her for a few years.

Yes... Her mother spanked Elizabeth, I know what your thinking... Weird I know.

Actually Shinjiro is here all this time, he choose to ignore my idiot stalker.

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid