Nice story, but very poorly written. I'm at Chapter 11 and I'm sick of reading "However" over and over again. You can find it at least once per paragraph, which means at least 6-7 times per chapter. Never heard of synonyms?
Love this story! This is the first book I have read by this author and am truly impressed! She has a great imagination. The book was hard to put down. I will be reading more of her stories.
