There is too little detail, and then there is too much. Personally I felt this novel was moving along at a very slow pace, and everything was described toooooo much. You could literally skip an entire chapter and read only the last paragraph and basically miss nothing. NGL, story was really good, but it either needs to be sped up/trimmed or needs a thousand more chapters so readers can skim through the hundreds of fluff and useless/boring info that is often regurgitated. I.e. We don't need to know every characters facial expression, nor do we need something that can be described in 5 words, to take 100+ words.Still, really good story, just wish it was less padded and more to the point.
