OBSIDIAN RIFT - Reviews

glad to see this is finally updating again after so long hope the author doesn't keep us waiting too long for the next chapter also (it's been over a year man did something happen)

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Overall the story is interesting, mostly the characters for me. A nice character design, along with a good story. Though the world background has room for improvement. The grammar is also good enough too.✌

Very good

I liked the premise of multiple systems but the grammar couldn't get me past chapter 4. it's bad, even for this app.

"No, I mean, you see... actually, I met someone in front of the church. You saw it yourself, right? But I couldn't remember."

"Forget their number, we won't even be able to kill one! She managed to deflect my「Heaven's Piercer! 」as if it was child's play! We run!"

"Hello Gibson

"Give me a reason as to why my master has to leave? Why can't he be here? He is my master!" The woman asked as she looked at the Lord of the Heaven. She felt her husband, who was always reasonable, was being unreasonable right now. What was the problem with her master coming her me without notifying them? She had no issue over this.

"Afternoon Fleur, How as the training been going for you?" asked Thor slightly curious.

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