It was a fairly entertaining read, and I am looking forward to how the story will develop, though I am a sucker for military themed content.
One suggestion I would like to see additional worldbuilding to provide greater context to the fictional nations to have, so readers can gain a greater grasp of how national affairs are impacting the characters. Of course a lore dump is not necessary, but additional sprinkles here and there can elevate the quality of your world.
Never the less, I am looking forward to the next chapter!