No Second Chance, Dear X - Reviews

Petition to bring back "I Can See the Lines of Fortune"! A wonderful story to try, especially now that pocket hunting dimension is over. An all around interesting read! Please resume the translation of it! (Trying this as it worked for World of Deities)

There is a lot of potential for this story, but the quality of writing detracts so much from the overall novel it becomes almost unreadable. - Switching between past and present tense, grammar and punctuation errors abound.- The sentence structure itself in many paragraphs is broken or reversed.This has the working of a great novel, but it needs some love and care - an editor could make this novel so much better.Even if the author put it into word and grammarly it could make a huge difference.

at the beginning of the first 20 chapters the story was a bit boring, the story started to get interesting at the 30th chapter, I think this novel has a good future.

5/5 for warhammer.                     Nn

"Okay then. You take care where ever you are. Ciao! Love you!" Zane bid before she ended the phone call not letting Gypsy to answer back.

With every trace of ores, Li Fuchen would immediately project his qi and consciousness into the walls.

I will breathe deeply and touch the bell

I sniffed, my eyes going red, and I can feel the tears coming up. but I can't let them see. I wouldn't be able to explain. It's takes all my will power to hold back the tears at least for now. It takes me a moment to put on a temporary emotionless facade.

The female genin thought it odd to see such a distinct difference in the colour of a person's chakra or to see such great parallels in the difference at all. Most people she had looked upon with her inherited doujutsu carried chakra of an often blue tint, ranging from glaring whites and glowing silvers to ocean blues and even faint traces of violet, but never had she seen red in a person. Whether it something exclusive to Koan, though, she wasn't sure. Naruto's chakra, albeit in a different location on his body, carried a similar red stream, though his seemed far more centralized than Koan's. Her mind disengaged from her train of thought as she saw a flash of movement in front of her.

「...I don't have a Maid-san. Isn't it just your imagination?」

"okay, i really hope to see you tomorrow. i'll scream the word at sundown, is that good?" you asked the others. "it's totally fine! be sure not to drown again though." taehyung warned me. i stood up, "i promise." i smiled at them. "well then, we will go now. bye (y/n) see you tomorrow!" they waved me a goodbye. i waved back, "bye bye!!" i yelled. i giggled and started to go back home.

Jiang Liushi frowned. "I need it, can you give it back before Sunday? It was my emergency money."