Nine Demon Transformation - Reviews

I am not a fan of the inuzuka clan but this one is awesome!!! Worth the read and I highly recommend this to everyone! Keep up the good work.  ?

Trash......................................................................................................................................

I evaluated it just to see if it releases faster. ?????????????????????????????????????????????

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I think it is still to early to comment on the  story development, since not much of a do over has happened to the mc situation.   Needs more revision, I cannot bring myself to give a five star, too many areas need improvement.   I wouldn't call this a success, but we all have to start somewhere. Keep working on your skills. don't give up!Peace& Love .

The chapters are to long, I have to scroll down for hours just to finish a paragraph. You should reduce at least 69% of the word counting to make it enjoyable.

"Bring it on then," He said getting up and gesturing Simeon to attack. A portal opened next to Simeon, who punched into it and landed it on Crayne's back. Crayne ran towards Simeon but hit an invisible wall. He slammed a marking covered fist into the wall trying to break it, but the magic spell only detonated and died down.

A WW2 relic enthusiast perishes when he crashes his restored me109 plane on his way to an airshow. Time agents saves what remains of him and employs him to help them prevent time rogues from messing with history. Specifically during the period of WW2. He is embedded with knowledge he needs to survive the ordeal and so this story goes, taking the role of an officer favored by the furher. This novel accounts his shenanigans.

The dude that I zapped, on the other hand, was laying on the ground twitching like a fish out of the water. Then something shrieked next to me.

of cause not my dear, I understand his pain but I don't think that is the best solution to this case.

Lucy tried to cheer me up while giggle at my predicament.