I really wish I could enjoy this story, but no the story is incredibly rushed and have no feeling to it, all characters are paper cutouts that have even less peronality than a Wuxia martial arts novel Combine that with 0 proof reading and the murder of the English language, it’s just a recipe for disappointment
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This novel is excellent and has potential. The world in this novel is ruled by women and the Mc isekai here. I wonder if he will be princess carried too. I'd love to see that. I also can't wait until the magic is shown, and perhaps the Mc can take down a dragon.
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This is a great book I've read a lot of cheat cultivation and system novels on this app this novel in its self is great over all it keeps getting interesting. I love it .I hope it keeps on going
They were not far away before the voice over the sirens began to make sense. "ATTENTION! EMERGENCY! ALL GENIN TEAMS MUST EVACUATE IMMEDIATELY! OROCHIMARU HAS ENTERED THE FOREST! PLEASE FALL BACK UNTIL REINFORCEMENTS ARRIVE!"
