Negativity Culmination - Reviews

bruh why are there so many 5 star reviews the writing quality is terrible with loads of grammar and spelling mistakes. do people just spam 5 stars for anything that looks remotely English now?

The logic is not strong with this one. Author jacks up common sense to force the character into cliche situations that don’t make sense. Sounds like whenever the author reads a cliche situation, then they feel obligated to include it in their story without any buildup or regardless of it making sense in the novel. 5/5 for stable releease, 1/5 for everything else. Wish i could give a 10/5 for overusing plot armor

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I don't know what it looks like next, but the beginning looks painfully similar to the Supreme Magus, except for a few small changes (like the food-stealing brother being adopted instead of legitimate and magic being less common) in a different world, basically took 90% of what was good in the story and replaced it with bad parts. Sorry, it sounds too negative, but you can tell how I felt reading nearly 50 chapters of this work. Note: I don't know if this qualifies as a spoiler, so I'm putting this just in case. I'm also reading on Google Translator, so I won't be able to identify the quality of the writing, nor do I plan to follow up to see if I meet the post frequency, so I put 3 stars on both to be considered on average.

Honest ReviewVery well written, very interesting, but sadly just as it starts to get rolling you run out of content...  The whole premise is a bit flawed as I find it hard to believe nobody would recognize him, but then again I once ran in to Kid Rock and totally thought he was a regular guy until a crowd started forming.  Dude just wanted a coffee...The Good:Excellent Grammar!  A rich kid being forced to lead a "normal" life isn't anything new by any means, but I find these kind of stories almost always enjoyable.The Bad:It's not exactly the author's fault from what his comments said, but 6 days with no updates is bad for a WPC entry.  I really don't have any other glaring complaints about the story itself except that I wish it had more.The Neutral:His "friends" had me a little confused, are they old friends of his just playing a prank or new friends of his that want to watch his world burn?  I personally wished to get a little more background on them, but it is not necessary.

'System is System.' The system said in an indifferent tone that sounded like a woman's.

"By the way, the nickname 'Beach Ball' sounds really plain. *Mutters* Better than Karma's though."

At the center of the platform, Meng Shui was looking at the man in front of him with disdain in his eyes. The man in front of him was just at the late stages of Qi gathering, he was confident that he could defeat the man easily.

My friend's voice echoed in my head as I remembered her warning the one that I so stupidly ignored the one decision that I regret. "Don't go with him I have a bad feeling about him he gives me a weird feeling and I would feel guilty if anything happens to you Mi.." she never got to finish her warning before I walked away with that little satan's spawn which I thought was an absolute angel till about midnight. I had just turned twenty-two and went out drinking with a group of friends when I met him." Hey, are you free?" Where the last words that I would say to Emma before I dropped my phone and blacked out only to awake to a dark area which seemed like the trunk of a car as I could hear cars honking.

, Deku bastard-Deku did not move and let him get dangerously close to him.

He walked around everywhere he could have access to for finding some people on the brink of death.  He knew it was something weird to do, but he wanted to give people another chance.  He could possibly give them powers in that new world!  In the end, he only found about two to three people and put their souls inside of the jars.

author, just continue to upload please. don't stop, don't stop, don't stop. I've seen too much books with potential just fall off, but this is too good. If this also enters hiatus or gets dropped, then I'll just stop reading "ongoing" books completely. do it for me