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I just finished volume 1 and there are no spoilers below :)I’m honestly blown away. There were some mistypes along the way, but I don’t think I’ve been so captivated by a book in a while. The writing style was refreshing to say the least, and usually when an author hides important plot information from me (the reader) I get a bit irritated at how obvious it is they are going to use it for some dumb reason and ruin the story. This was definitely not the case here. I actually enjoyed being led by the nose during this read. It felt like the author had a well planned and thought out story before they started putting It onto a page, and I really appreciated that. It made me look forward to that little bit of information the author might drop every chapter, and I didn’t want to skim or skip chapters (like I might usually do during other reads ?)  because I was actually invested in what I was reading (unlike most book where I can predict the story 10 chapters ahead ?).****************************************Long story short this book is awesome so far, and even if I don’t find myself finishing this one, I will definitely be keeping track of this author and their works!! I recommend anyone else do the same. It’s harder and harder to find quality work that makes you want to write a long review anymore.****************************************

sounds interesting hoping for more chapters keep it up and don't drop.....................................................................................................................

Really a Good Novel , Please Continue the history i really loved this system novel , i just wait alot of chapters -___- , please post quickly , I Really Recommend This Novel .

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I'm the author so I would shamelessly give it a five star review. And the start may be a little messy which is common in my works but please do give it a chance and read further.

As a fan of Romance novels this is a new experience for me, this story is well thought of and the plot is quite interesting. This is my first novel of this genre and I like it a lot. keep up the good work.

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This needs a lot of editing before publishing; seeing it from the first chapter, I already have seen most of its flaws. And I wonder if this was even reviewed before being included as an entry in this contest.

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Obviously, there is no finite point at which a piece of literature stops being a short story and becomes a novel -- but for the purposes of this paper, I'm going to establish some benchmarks. According to A Handbook to Literature, a short story runs from 500 to 15,000 words -- with a long short story being between 12,000 and 15,000 (480-1). The terms novella, novelette, nouvelle and short novel are virtually interchangeable. The Handbook suggests that a novelette is "longer than a short story and shorter than a novel" (360). It further describes a short novel as being between 15,000 and 50,000 words (479). This gap strikes me as too broad, so I prefer Gardner's finer definition, that a novella is between 30,000 and 50,000 words (179). And novels are beyond 50,000 words, according to a variety of sources, including the Handbook and E.M. Forster, who said in 1927, "Any fictitious prose work over 50,000 words will be [considered] a novel. . ." (6).