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not too sure what happened but chapters are all over the place, repeats again and again, no editing or chapters out of order and making no sense at all- it's all such a shame to the author who has clearly put a lot of effort in.

Well-written and entertaining. I don’t often comme across a novel I like but when I do.... oh, boy. I’ve been reading it non-stop and can only recommend it.

Can’t read a lot of it with out losing brain cells because it’s trash and trash is what Webnovel is becoming right now due to what they are doing to the website. I wish the website is bought someone who restore webnovel.

Aside from a few grammatical errors which could easily be overlooked, this story is of much higher quality than many you can find on WebNovel. I enjoy the blend of Sci-Fi and Fantasy, with youkai (I think that was a youkai) and AI all presenting in the first chapter.Keep up the good work, and I believe you'll excel in no time, Author!♥

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Another good story!The synopsis have a lot of contradiction, It makes you wonder which one will it be.I like how the character is, Reigan and Celine... I wonder how the development will be...Keep it up, author. I will wait for your chapters.

I agree with what the other reviewers wrote. It definitely isn't the best novel out there. And understand why there maybe exist people that wouldn't like it. But for me, it is the only novel in a long time that I feel I have actually enjoyed reading. I Have read up to chapter 345 as of this review. And except for a couple of chapters between chapter 168 and 174(don't know exactly the reason just had to take a lite break from the story before returning to it), I would say that every chapter has brought me joy when reading.In the beginning, the misunderstanding felt a little(very little) forced. But now a couple of dozen chapters in, the misunderstanding feels to happen naturally to me. And that is a massive improvement. It would be boring to read a story where the author had to constantly take away the Protagonist's brain cells, to create a misunderstanding.Worldbuilding may not seem so great in the beginning, but as the story has moved along more and more details of an amazingly large world are revealed.Writing Quality I would say is good, there might be a few grammatical errors now and then, but I can easily overlook them.Story development is good, the plot moves along nicely, and at a steady pace. Some chapters now and then might be just fillers without plot, and just containing something ridiculous. But the author makes up for that with  3 chapters every day, many of them filled with plot development.Character design is where this web novel shines I believe.  As the author himself said, this Is a book about a character going through constant misunderstandings. And to make those misunderstandings happen without totally cutting away half of the Main and other characters' brain cells. Is amazing to me.The only problem that I stumbled upon when reading the chapters was the author's unique writing style, but when I got used to it, it was that writing style that made me enjoy this book so much.If you are hesitating whether to read this web novel or not, at least read the prologue and you will get an idea about the story, characters, and the author's writing style.

..................................................One of the best story I've ever read so far.  I really love it. mysterious as ever. keepkeepit up Author!

I've only read the prologue but I have to leave a comment on thisOne of the best prologues on this entire site. It actually does the job of hooking you in, I felt like one of the demons listening to the middle age mans story. Gave me goosebumps

bro, simply what a wonderful story, the protagonist is the construction of the empire of the black bar, simply my favorite novel, I really ask that the author keeps Minos Stuart being a king and in the future creating a kingdom in the "upper kingdom, I would say that it is the best novel I've ever read, the only one that managed to make me sad with the death of some characters (2182 incredible and cruel author).

Quite the novel. Something I found rather pleasing was how well this novel is written. Not in the sense where every sentence is composed of complex vocabulary but because of how well everything is described. It's never boring as the author doesn't create entire paragraphs of details on small things to fill up the chapter with words. Along with that comes the occasional casual dialogue which gives off a sense of relaxation which makes the novel more enjoyable. Very good read!

"Say it again" he said against my breast nibbling the nipples with his pearl white teeth.