Na Feighlithe - Reviews

I haven't had goosebumps while reading in forever, and yet i felt it while reading chapter 13. It's so good it's a crime that it has so little chapters rn.

Its my first time create a novel so sorry if there was misspelled word , capital ,  bad grammar. Ill try to fix it if i spot it so do comment. I dont need subscribe since it was no youtube. but i really happy if you like and enjoy this. Oh and please let me rate my own novel. it will not gonna hurt you all right? :p

This is actually one of the better fan-fictions on this site and it needs more recognition for the hard work and effort he puts on the work keep it up man!

The story of the young Leo was an amazing experience for me because of your work I was hoping for you to make another one or continue the series. Please continue your work I hope to see more

That was it, she turned around heading for her room. She didn't want to hear anymore.

This event helped the magus society discover the revolutionary space storage relics, an item that greatly helped the masses to preserve food.

It had been a long time he had slept like this and even dreamed. He was covered by flames and his skin was burning, he could see the skin falling off, but he didn't feel any pain, it felt like water washing over his body bringing a refreshing sensation, the flames burnet every weakness and fatigue, the feeling was so great that he was getting lost by it, he felt so strong like never before, he wanted to run, to break, to fight. Fight? He never liked fighting, he wouldn't low his head when he encounters one fight but he didn't like the feeling. "No" he said to himself "I don't want to fight

"Kakak... Kakak... Kakak... Dia ternyata tidak sebaik yang ku kira, dia menghianatiku, aku melihat dia sedang tidur dengan wanita tanpa pakaian, bertelanjang, dia sama saja dengan pria lainnya, dia... Pria... Dia-"

"Mmm, mmm!"

Next Level: Host need to reach Flower Realm

I could use a little fuel myself

these reviews are after reading the novel after 1400 quick summarygood- world building, action scenes, story development bad- romance, character developments, plot developments i have binged the novel up at these point. it has its scene that grabs ones attention and those that make you lose in the story. many parts in the story where great developments are made feel left behind to come around to again. the pacing feels rushed not full developing character stories or plots. but the story has really big moments where the story has great developments finally putting pieces together to make one enjoyable story. as well as scenes that make u want to know what's going to happen next to continue reading.