Mythic Legends: The Evolving System - Reviews

So yeah my FanFiction isn't perfect at all honestly but I'm really grateful to the people that enjoy reading it.

After reading 10 chapters, I can't say what would distinguish this apart from any other offering in the MMORPG area.  This story relies a lot on game mechanics to fill the word count and if I were to compare it to something, the closest will be MMORPG: Elementalist.  Both are boring to read and the plots are slow to progress.Way too much exposition in these 10 chapters.  From a story crafting perspective, it's like using 10 chapters in the place of 1st page of Hunger Games.  That is to say the pacing and world building for this story is inept.

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novel had good start , had the potential to become one of the best novel if author had remained on plot. I don't know what author  thought but he ruined a good story and then started coping solo leveling. novel lost its Originallilty. if only author had remained on its original plot this novel would have been in my top 5.but now novel has just turned into another wannabe solo leveling

I know the story is just getting started but I'm so curious as to what will take place. So far I like the characters and I can't wait to see more of the main character. Furthermore the description of the scenery and the world makes me feel like I can picture everything. Looking forward to the rest of the story please update faster!!!

Whoaa.. it's amazing! I really love the adventure genre like this so much, especially this powerful ML. Also, there's a scent of One Piece's little bit that the lead wanna follow his dream and fight for his life. The lead will surely become the martial artist king lol. That's the reason why I wanna read and follow til the end.

Her attitude and lack of response irritated Roland.

Magnler felt a deep sense of satisfaction from this.

before I went in the bed I rubbed  her whiskermarks  she started to purr

"There is no need to make a fuss, Lian," he replied stiffly, pointedly ignoring the two angry mama bears. "Just focus on recovering."

in our eyes remained the same

Harmon, William, and C. Hugh Holman, eds. A Handbook to Literature. 7th ed. Upper Saddle River, N.J.: Prentice Hall, 1996.