My System Academy

The story is very good. Unlike 99% of the stories on this site, this one is very well written so far. The main protagonist is not brain dead and can think. So far there has been no romance that drags down the story. His system is pretty well done and not annoying. The world background is well told and diverse. Overall a very good read. Keep up with the updates!.

The concept is great and I like the idea behind it, but punishment systems are the worst because it basically requires the mc to follow the systems orders instead of actually doing anything on his own. Im not even going to get into the demi-human stuff. I kept getting thrown off by thinking that there wasn't a cliche, but then somehow the author throws it in last second as a surprise that you didn't see coming. I just didn't like how the novel played out even though it had a great idea, and the system was very inconsistent with its own logic. "We don't grade talent, we grade personality", "Only profound roots or higher can be taught".

Honestly this could have been perhaps a hidden gem if it wasn't for the fact that it's a cultivation novel.  Magic, system and cultivation, three settings that contradict each other in a way that it makes it hard for authors to design a power system that feels impactful, fair and somewhat balanced. In this novel you could hardly feel the 'magic' element, simply replace 'magic spells' with 'martial arts', 'magic' with cultivation and 'academy' with sect and you get yourself a generic cultivation novel where the more our Mc progresses in his story the weaker he actually gets (not technically) , also I don't see the point of the system, it just does everything for our Mc, people in the reviews call him 'smart', 'unique' ... But the system literally gives him everything from randomly invited students that are flowing with talents to mythical-grade magical roots and anything else he happens to need at the convenient time, at this point I'm asking why not make him build the 'academy' from scratch with the help of his sugar daddy (the system)? Or perhaps make him actually care for the 'academy'?. You know, whatever, moving on

Whats with the pacing in this novel? Everything happens so suddenly and randomly without any prior development or foreshadowing that any event in this novel whether it's an important side character backstory arc or a simple info dump immediately loses its weight before it even starts. That's again another problem with these type of novels smh

I'm in love with this book. I need more. The plot was great, I can't stop reading, and this book has so much potential the way it was set up. Please if not a mass release at least a chapter a week or preferably a day or two.

This story is really good and really like it's world building. The character developments are well written. I really love this one. Author thanks for the story and need more chapters.

So, here is my review. I think the story overall is good, but I feel like it's too little on the academy building and other characters. I somehow find myself skipping chapters in relation to the MC to get back to the scenes of him either A, doing something with the kids, or B, doing something with regard to the other characters.

The mc annoys me, but that's primarily because his personality traits are of those people who irritate me in reality. (Not really a  negative just an observation)

It's a good premise just found myself getting a bit bored when the MC fell on the OP sword and then swung too "I must cultivate, cus weak right now"

If his strength comes from being a headmaster...I would like to see more headmastering going on like finding more students, getting teachers, building relations with other schools...so on and so forth.