my scarred mate - Reviews

Great so far

i just want to askdoes no one care that it uses catties kilogram and 500gram and that it always changesuch inconsistency make it hard to read

It kinda sound's like the authors rambling on in the first 5 or so chapters. like they don't have a clear picture or understanding of what's they're writing. Overall the concept and ideas are there but I think they could've been developed further.

Patient and smart mc. The goldenfinger is not too overpowering. It is rara to see such a complete book. A breath of fresh air within the eastern novels.

Good job ......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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Great start. Good pace. Nice story development as of now. All the best author.

The Captain hummed. "Good point!"

Once Su Shi suppressed her breakthrough, the thunderclouds which looked deadly started fading away, only then did Su Song let out a big sigh of relief.

Focusing Silk converted the remaining flames into magical energy and put it into his key. The sky seemed to shudder as a new moon appeared in the sky. The new moon was the workshop that Silk longed to return to but knew it wasn't possible yet.

"I actually gather a lot of attribute and skill points and there's about a week left, heh this system is really generous."Nathan said with a delighted smile.

Naruto turned his head to the side just in time to see the dragon demon's cock was separated from his body by a clean cut from his mother's tanto. It didn't even manage to cry out in pain because Kushina appeared above the demon and stabbed her sword down its head, killing the enormous being instantly. The rest of the smaller demons, which was still stunned by the sudden appearance of Kushina, was soon taken down by the same woman by having their heads disconnect from their neck.