My magic weapons are all rule-based - Reviews

Its a web novel so 9/10 Times youd expect the Overall oF the sTory to be terible but...My 7 Year old cousin could write a story with a better background which Would make more Sense than this.The story starts with a guy who decides to spend 2.5 Billion Dollars on a game which are not his (theY’re his aunties) his aUntie cASually agrees to give him that money.Uh ah also the writing narratioN ahhh i cant

Read this if u want something new..in this novel many things is old which we read in other video games novel but it has my new things also... overall good.much better then other trail video games novel.

Everything is good exept the spelling and grammer which could be easily fixed with proofreading. There are also no random buetifull woman that are more beutiful then the last falling in kove with him like in other storys.

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reviewing for the event fp. keep up the good work.

"Hey, dad?" Laney asked tentatively, "He's my bodyguard and mentor?"

I felt an excruciating pain again in my head however this time it was a lot less than the one I felt when I was being transferred to this world. It lasted for a few seconds after which I saw that I could practice all the techniques.

"Kono uta wa towa ni ikiteku yo"

With subordinates aquired, he needed a base. For that, he needed to aquire a propriety, and the abandonned one they were currently using would do. Especially once he performed a bit of remoddeling. He checked his status to see how much money he had.

"How I wish she would look at us for once"

She scream so loud ( ahhhhhh !!! ) and I tried to cover up my eyes not just my eyes but my whole face because it was to embarassing ! I said I'm very sorry ..