MY ALPHA,DAMON - Reviews

A really well done book. 100% recommended.Enjoy the story of our MC maintaining his prison order against various powers, which scale up throughout the story.A bit out of topic, but I still want to see the table of Ruler's Authority which I didn't quite understand during my time reading, though it didn't impact major story progress.

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I am at chapter count 505 and now I'm dropping this novel into the gutter.This story was good at the start. Fishing, from under the nose of op characters, cultivating with most unique and original methods, eating legendary food which even MC didn't know will fish again or not. Making people drool and let readers imagination run wild.  But later on it became sh'it. MC going around killing people, becoming conceited and biased (which happens with 70% of all the novels in asian world:- China berating Japanese, Japanese berating Chinese and korean berating both). And MC dies, looses his cultivation, possesses dying old man's body (having lots of children's and grand children) MC is still virgin btw, and start over.Cultivation in this novel sucks. Writer wasn't able to bring out the essence of cultivation.

As further chapters are locked,can anyone *recommend me any site to read it for free*.It is really a good novel if you are bored with other.

A very interesting read turning the afterlife into a game. I loved the creative approach of the author in how they explained the afterlife and the process of waiting to meet the king of the underworld. One thing that threw me off was that the king of the underworld was a female although constantly being referred to as King which is normally a term saved for males.Other than that the writing was great the pacing amazing throughout. The way the character grows in the game and outpaces many other players out of sheer determination was interesting to see and reminds me of some people I know in real life who are the same way when gaming.All in all. Great work author! It was a fun read and it is exciting to see where the story will go next.

Frankly, a disappointment, a naive personality, trivial dialogues, a scared hero, a trivial system that gives experience for free as if it were a donor. How bad is this?

It's a pretty bleh story. The writing isn't so great and although that is understandable for non native speakers, I'd have to say that the lack of character development, plot, and world design especially ruin it. A recent trend has been sloppily throwing things from popular fiction into a system and making the MC OP. It's easy to do, but the outcome absolutely sucks especially if there is no good contextual world and plot development. And the MC? An okay choice but the flawness of his emotions and personality are serious, making him a flat one dimensional "edgy" ****.I'm not really going to talk about OPness and realism as novels vary in the flavor, mood and focus. Novels with OP systems usually compensate the lack of rich plot with character development or humor. Author needs to find some aspect that is their own, that they can maximize the appeal of to the readers.My suggestion would be to go back and produce a coherent plot, flesh out the characters by 500%, and most of all, at least describe the things and "evolutions" with enough depth so that it isn't just "oh hey, I had X tool which conveniently solves this current problem." I think the merit of the novel currently is exploration, specifically with what is the next evolutions? This definitely could be a possible way of improving the novel, and I leave it up to the author to try and improve it in his own way.

It would do alot better if it had an editor, unfortunately it's basically mtl quality.

interesting start , can't wait for more chapters. hopefully author continues the story

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