Mummy Evolution - Reviews

Why do translators still want to translate this type of novel? I mean, there are many of these novels on Webnovel, but they continue to translate the same genre of novels. Believe me, readers are fed up with novels of the same type constantly.

I have read up to the end of book 1 and will be dropping this book.  The author and the world have great potential but there were two things that killed it for me personally.The first was that the details of this novel just seem subtly wrong.  A good example of what I mean is the response to a comet coming near earth.  This happens semi-regularly in the real world and the various responses people have to it (from cults proclaiming the end of days to nothing at all) are fairly well known.  In this world though, every world leader gives an IDENTICAL speech at exactly the same time to reassure all citizens of their countries.  Everyone in the world stops working and hides in their house with emergency food for days before the comet comes.  After the comet flies by the planet, there is worldwide rioting for days.  This is insane.  Why???  There are a lot of oddities like this in the novel that stand out and were regularly breaking my immersion in the story.The other issue is the tone.  This book is about teenagers in high school (one of whom has super powers).  Great.  But our super hero straight up permanently disables his fellow students because he doesn't like them.  His principal murders a man for threatening a student (even when the man has no way to carry out such a threat).  The good guys in this novel are violent and dark.  That is the GOOD guys.  In a novel about teenage super heroes.  It reminds me of books like the meta world chronicles over at royal road and that is not a good thing.  It feels like if I was reading the first Harry Potter book and Harry was permanently cursing kids in Slitherin because of fights at school and Dumbledore murdered Harry's muggle family for being pricks.  It isn't that this is impossible just a really jarring tone in that kind of book.That said I really liked the original take on reincarnating.  Selling music, videogames, Youtube channels, etc. were all great ideas.  The cultivation system was well done.  The characters were fairly well developed and change over time which is great.  The writing is excellent with few to no noticeable grammatical or spelling issues.  I definitely think the author is talented and is doing a great job for a first novel.

.                                                                                                                                   .Perfect... but almost abandoned... I do not know if something happened, but there is almost no release.

I just started reading it and im already liking it ahhh ????u200d♀️

I am sorry if I skimmed over the first chapter, but I found it really mysterious even at the beginning. And I love a mystery in the story. -The writing quality is readable and understandable. For someone who is dumb like me in processing words, I can read it. -The stability of updates... As an author who fails, I don't really mind the stability as long as you update and upload a chapter.-The story development, I will still have to read more, but I don't have time for that as an author trying to achieve something. However, looking at the number of chapters, there is a story. And that's what matters.-Character design and world background could be labeled as one, but my thoughts on it depends on the writing quality. So its as good as five stars. Good luck and God bless.

Fire from where Silk had started the burning rushed forwards wrapping them closely. There wasn't enough room in the tornado for someone else so it was relatively safe if they didn't burn to death. Phoenix wouldn't because the enchantments on her cloak would prevent this, Silk didn't have enough power to stop himself burning though.

"I'm thinking going back to the North Border tomorrow to monitor some progress," the General says after he finishes gulped down three cups of water.

After he finds her home, he was waiting for a chance to talk with her but every time he step forward to talk her, his fear stop's  him. He follows her every day wherever she go, and trying to talk. One day the girl noticed him that he follows her, but she doesn't care about that, thought he also studying in same university so he always comes behind her. A days gone, he keep on trying to talk but fails. The boy's brother thinking about his wheather he spoke to her or not and he gave a call but the boy didn't pick up the phone call cause he following her and trying to talk, after she get into university gate he stopped infornt of gate and the mobile rings again, the mobile vibrates inside his pocket just picked up and

"My name is Michael Harper

Dan aku harus kehilangan 2 sosok dan 2 rasa itu sekaligus, hidupku seketika menjadi hampa dan gelap, seolah seketika aku menjadi buta. Aku tidak bisa melihat apapun. Kecuali kepingan perasan yang telah menjadi debu.

yuri: what's are you talking about your name is kaichi right

In the shape of an "L" on her forehead