Mortal Immortal Cultivation Simulator

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needed a story with this concept I can get behind it .            .              .                  .            .        .                 .

What ruins this story for me is that it puts itself in the setting of Perfect World, an already established novel. It's as if the author felt too lazy to make a world of their own.What is especially disappointing is that the synopsis doesn't even mention a bit of this, but is intentionally misleading. The story doesn't even feel like it will abide by the original novels plot, more like the author just took the names of the characters from Perfect World and bastardized it.

Good Stuff MATTTEEEEEEEE! Writing quality; could have some improvements but my English ain't all that good anyway. Stability of updates; I don't really care, as long as chapters are released frequently. Obviously, real life isn't that simple in which someone can easily release chapters daily. Story development; I like. Character design; I like a lot. Muscle Men and Bald Bros for life. World background; pretty good, it's basically modern with just slightly more advanced technology.

Pls come back, i need you. I need more chapters pls gimme them............fjdjdudhdociwhejfihsheigidbwjrofiehejfifiejhekfifkfjejdjfjgjfojebf