Modern Day Emperor - Reviews

This is one of my favorite novels of ALL times.It hás a Very good história and i like It so só só só só só só sonso much, i like fish tipo.

8 parts romance 2 parts story.Story started off really well, but eventually turned into a novel where MC turns out to be a flirtatious Alpha who can't keep it in his pants.MC joins the army but unlike what you'd expect, the new recruit is given an unlimited amount of freedom to do whatever he wants. It doesn't feel like the army at all and instead feels like a summer camp for teens with pent up hormones. Every new recruit in the army is thinking about hooking up with each other. There's no regulations at all.Up until the first new planet the story is pretty good. MC finds his soulmate and everything seems like as long as they can stay together everything will work out one way or another. Author does find a way to tear them apart though and what does MC do first once they're apart? Find another girl. The rebound was insanely fast. After that girl, he gets another girl, and once he drops that girl he gets another. This is all while comparing the new girls to the first one that he's still in love with. It's just a complete mess. The excuse was that he has his own urges and is really just looking for someone to satisfy them. It really doesn't help that every attractive girl he comes across instantly falls for him. I dropped around chapter 400 since it wasn't going anywhere else.

came to find gold and found diamond :3.                                                                                                   

noooooo you can not do this to me. After a long time of waiting for a novel that can make me wanna stay stuck reading it this is what you do to me.I want justice .. but since a kind, handsome, awesome and benevolent me I will only ask you to increase the spread of the updates

The writing's got room for improvement (as others here may have noticed), but as of this review's posting, whatever flaws were present don't detract from the content itself too much. Additionally, it may be best to limit allusions to existing works in pop culture to a minimum. I particularly recommend looking up comma splices, run-on sentences and sentence fragments on Google since these are the common mistakes I came across in your work.PS - if you'd like a more detailed go-over, kindly PM me over Discord or something :)

Gooood stoooory likkkke ittttt.want to read more

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suffering which would only end at the whim of the one who encroached inside the core of his being.

"Porters you have to take care of the leftovers and help as per situation while defending Emily." Gary finished his orders just as the Goblin chief had just reached and he jumped while carrying his broad sword to parry it.

He also did not explain about the crystal which now burned with smouldering blue-black flames in a metal container at the centre of the twin garage, which had been emptied for this purpose. Ren Zexian did stress, however, that the ability users should not pour their powers into the crystals; they were not strong enough for what would occur should they attempt to. When speaking to Nathan, he explained more carefully, in a steady, low voice, for he feared that the youth might accidentally connect with the crystals when watering their tree. Neither he nor Tyler had cultivated their abilities in an efficient manner, the loss of their spiritual energies to the crystal would be devastating to them.

I love this story so far. I can’t wait to see where it’s headed. The characters are great. The story line is great. The only thing that I would change is how often it is updated. It says 1 chapter per week but we don’t even get that. In that respect it seems like we have to wait forever for things to happen. If something is going on that the author can’t update as often as they would like to then I wish they would just post a little note like other authors do to give us a heads up we will be waiting for other chapters. We don’t need to know the reasons just give us a little side note. Hope the story picks up again.

The novel is great! Anyone who is interested in Apocalypse should read this, you will love it!