MMORPG : Ancient WORLD - Reviews

Great story and world building. But MC character isn't my favourite. classes and skills are the best I have seen in any novel. keep going forward.

I accidentally stumbled upon this story
I really liked it....
Please Author don't stop the chapters update if possible please increase them I know Asking is very much
but I really enjoyed your story

Potential: A
Execution: B-
Grammar: D-
Cliche Amount: A+
Overall: B-
Great idea and storyline, but the author ruined by not even TRYING to fix the grammar mistakes. I get not having english as a first language, but for god's sake just put it in free Grammarly or even a Google Doc

I like the novel but  will the release rate change in the future? 1 chapter a day is too little

Personally, I feel this novel is extremely good, the best thing I like about this story

a great novel overall, engaging story enough realisem and great mc.

good book so far on chapter 117 but to much padding to explain a simple items takes like 3 chapters. also the mc likes to forget some important stuff.

great story that uses the vr game as a base isnt really a novel of the type it actually reads more as a syatem in a fanatys world novel which is great as it makes it more enjoable in my opinion theres a lot of forshadowing of great things to come as of chapter ~200. Overall a grear read can only recomend

I really love this novel I can't help but wonder about what will happen next,I totally recomend this! （╹◡╹）

The story is comfortable to read, but there are a fair amount of grammar problems. We get a little snippet of most fight scenes and then the conclusion. I'd say the biggest issue is how every enemy is a total pushover. Someone shouldn't be able to give three full powered slashs before their higher leveled opponent could even react. Nearly every fight scene yet has such issues.

Hello, fellow author. I'm going to give you some constructive criticism.                                                                                                   1: Please show what's happening in the story more.                                                                           •In your story, you tell the reader that the character feels a certain way. Ex: "He felt confident."                                                                                                   Here's an example of showing your protagonist's confidence."He raised his chin high, looked his opponent in the eye, and smirked."                                                                                                 You can increase your word count if you explain each emotion. And your readers can immerse themselves better.                                                                                                 2: Please don't repeat the same information twice In the same chapter.                                        •This disrupts the reader's immersion in the story.                              •I know it helps add word count, but that frustrates readers.                                                                                                 3: Your grammar needs some work. It's hard to immerse yourself in a book if there are many grammatical errors.

I think it has great potential, and a hint of romance would truly go a long way.