Miss Jane - Reviews

I love the idea the Author has chose to bring the story to life, the story flows so gently making it seamless and attractive to the reader. I don't know What it is but this story reminds me of 'The maze runner Sequels ' a beautiful story so far

This is MHA, not One Piece. Something like the Rokushiki shouldn't even exist. He is already overpowered. How much more will you provide to his abilities !! He is already the foookin strongest

The story plot is very interesting, it's a great system story to read. The beginning gets one so hooked and you just keep reading, highly recommended.

*Cliff Ninja*

"How many?" She asks suspiciously.

"Yes, yes. I know."

Lapiz: I think that was my stomach by hehe

~haaaaaaa~

Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play

In order to acknowledge outside support and get freedom he journeyed to far awayGermany, Japan when it was period of 2nd world war! He decided to induce soldiers from outside to get freedom. Nehru at that time said "If Subhash would bring soldiers from outside and enter India, then I would be the first person to wield asword and oppose him." That was the extent to which he detestedSubhash babu.

great start but the whole pretending to be a driver thing gets old fast and it just keeps happening, I feel like it held back the story progression and character development alot

This is my first novel I wrote and hopefully won't be the last. I appreciate any sort of feedback you have so please roast my work.I'll try my best to update 1 chapter daily but keep in mind they'll be quite short.Hope you enjoy the story