Mind Chatter - Reviews

The first chapter was all I could read. It seems a machine translation. A bad quality one with minimal editing. I gave average rating to all other than writing quality as without reading the story can't judge.

I was a little wrong earlier, but forget it.    Well, I thought the story was interesting? I love it when he starts to look down on those gods.That is all from me! ha ha!

Came in with somewhat high expectations. It's not even readable as wish fulfillment. Idk how the author managed to do this tbh I'm impressed, it's like they messed up every part that could've been enjoyable.

This novel is probably one of the best on webnovel, but is on hiatus. It is a great story and the only problem would be the minor grammar mistakes. And you can check the other reviews if you want, cause all of them are 4 and more stars.

Funny the chapter two, lousy cook lol,continue your work author... we need mooooooorrreeeehehehehe I love that princess she is kind of cute reckless cute.. sometimes..

The story has a bit grammatical errors and the length of the chapters are short, it not a minus point but still try to make a little longer.The storyline is good and unique, the updating stability is good and the description are well written. Good luck Author. Keep writing and you will make it big someday.

I'm ****ting here. haha??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

Another novel I finished by Sixth-sama! He always write such great stories so you better add them all! So go on now read it, you will not regret it one bit! Umu!

"YOU!!!"

It was known as a KintuKintu a ground and rock type Pokemon according to my Pokedex. It had one eye fully opened with a maddening look that just screamed the bear was crazy, and the other was the exact opposite. This side of the bear seemed to be full of happiness and charm. It was like the one evil/good teddy bear hybrid I had watched once from an Anime. Even sides of the bear's fur was different with one side being a deep dark brown and the other being light beige color.

"Ne." jawabku keceplos. "a-ani." jawabku setelah itu. Tapi nasi sudah menjadi bubur. Kulihat Sehun menatapku lama dalam diam. Seakan tengah berpikir keras. "w-waeyo?" tanyaku takut-takut.

-IT STARTS WITH YOURSELF.