Meant to Bea - Reviews

What the hell is up with this just sticking system into anything. Why even give a system to a guy who is already comparatively good at studying. Doesnt seem like something that I would read.

Bland charactersThe ways the story depicted is lifelessLike a old tv black and white cant feel anythingHas potential sadly the way the story narrated is lifeless

Well it's been 9 months and I hope that the author decides to continue this work...  I thought chapters 3,4,5 were straight up hardcover publisher quality quality...  Some of the latter chapters get a bit wordy in a way that does not develop, enrich, or further the plot or characters but more a word count extension... THAT being said, the writing quality of this story is easily near the top of WebNovel...  ...    Another reviewer made a great point, "An interesting take on a game world and its mechanics. The 'balanced fortunes' system (for lack of a better name) that the world has is a surprising new take on how a game may be designed, at least in my reading/playing experience."   ...  ...  The work feels like it has some of the flavor of "Ready Player One

I don't understand how can one say all credit goes to Original Author, Translator,Editor and stuff and post this here. I don't know if it's copied or new Translator or Webnovel is starting afresh or bought from other Translator and besides Novel Updates shows the Publisher as xxsy so is it some how linked with Webnovel if not how then it's here Legally. Well I already read it elsewhere so not going to read it anyhow just giving my view and besides the other Translation is almost at the end. If Webnovel is Officially and Legally doing Translation here then Props to you guys and all the best  I guess ?? I will vote medium as I don't want to blemish the Novel story

Overall it's an extremely enjoyable story, with a good concept, interesting characters, and great story development. Now I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the next upload. Keep up the good work!

Is not going to be long winded review, but the grammar could be improved and also his style of writing. But English is not his first language and I think I don’t have problem with that. I’m just trying to be honest here.But let’s talk about the story itself. Marvelously crafted. Small details decorating the story to know and understand out character is not only one sided but has a human emotion. The world build is pretty interesting too. Sometimes you don’t have to tell everyone what’s going on but can actually show them what they have in the story. Like when the author introduces technology to the era where martial arts reigning supreme. Overall this could be really good story!

"Your glass is empty, would you like a refill?" Rick showing me the bottle of whisky, he poured me a drink and when he was about to leave I stopped him.

Passing by a mirror, she confirmed that her eyes were indeed red and a bit swollen. She was still objectively pleasing to look at, with her fair skin, heart-shaped face, big light brown eyes and long, wavy black hair. She's been complimented as gorgeous and beautiful too many times than she'd cared to count, but she never thought it was important. Many of the best actresses she knew and looked up to weren't the most gorgeous beauties. An actress' main job was to convey emotion effectively and suck in viewers into the world displayed on the screen, not to look beautiful on camera. Still, she knew she'd sometimes gotten jobs over other actresses not necessarily because she was more skilled, but because she was more beautiful.

"What was that about?" he asks in a whisper.

Reagan: "What do you mean ugly?! Gold digging b*tches like to flock around me for my looks and money! Why would I even care about a bimbo like you?!"

"You think that full frontal assault against outnumbering forces will work everytime?"

"Dr. Abigail" took Gene's hands and shook it. She felt nothing special, she was not a bit interested on the man in front her. Sure he looks above average. Other women maybe head over heals swept by that single smile...unfortunately she's not. She smiled on the man anyway just to return the gesture.