Its a good story about a guy down on his luck and looking for a way out. I'm not sure if the company he's working for will do right by him or liquidate him when its over. It was a fun read.
The story is very engaging and the quality of writing is also good. The story progression is also good. Keep on writing and keep providing quality contests. I support you Author. I want more chapter.
Laughter fills the room as Luke stare embarrassed. "Woods you're ok!" getting closer to me Luke's eyes get a little teary. Chuckling in his direction he mumbles "Don't do that again you scared the life out of me.
